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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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The shoulders are better, but they're still a bit too squared off. Slope them down some more. The hips/waist also look better.
The major things with this one remains that the abdomen is stretched out to far, as is the collarbone area. These need to be shrunk some. I've noticed that the abdomen is about the size of the forearm(elbow to wrist), and that the hand ends about halfway down the outer thigh.
I think that should be good. If I can think of anything else I'll let you know.
Thank you for ready, and I hope you find this helpful
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